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DSE 2025 · 考生 Tommy Lee · Section D · 12 分 · 滿分 12
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概念層級同關鍵詞取自教科書概念樹;掌握程度由本卷官方分計算。L4 精通 · L3 穩固 · L2 基礎 · L1 待補強。
C1 機遇與風險Opportunities & Risks · 板塊構造災害 12/12 L4 精通
C1.U1.B 板塊及板塊邊界 Plates & Plate Boundaries 6/6 L4 精通

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拉張型邊界(構造型) (a) L4 6/6

關鍵詞 divergent, constructive plate boundary · 教科書 p.8

聚合型邊界(破壞型) (a) L4 6/6

關鍵詞 convergent, destructive plate boundary · 教科書 p.8

錯動型邊界(守恆型) (a) L4 6/6

關鍵詞 transform, conservative plate boundary · 教科書 p.8

C1.U4.I 海嘯 Tsunamis 6/6 L4 精通

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海嘯成因 (a) L4 6/6

關鍵詞 submarine earthquake, submarine volcanic eruption, submarine landslide · 教科書 p.67–69

海嘯分佈 (a) L4 6/6

關鍵詞 Pacific Ocean concentration · 教科書 p.67

C1.U5.K 減災與預警系統 Loss Minimization & Warning Systems 6/6 L4 精通

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監測/預測/預警 (b) L4 6/6

關鍵詞 seismograph, evacuation route · 教科書 p.81–82

緩解與準備 (b) L4 6/6

關鍵詞 earthquake drill, hazard-proof design, land-use planning · 教科書 p.82–86

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題目Describe and explain how plate movement along different plate boundaries leads to the occurrence of tsunamis.
學生原答
There are three types of plate boundaries on earth which acted with different internal forces. Various plate movements will lead to the occurence of tsunamis in different ways, which will be illustrated in the following paragraphs. Starting with, tsunamis are formed by the uplifting and displacement of seafloor or sea bed, which is formed ^with a large succession of waves washing towards the shore. It is mostly formed by submarine earthquakes, submarine landslides and submarine volcanic eruptions. Submarine earthquakes caused tsunamis which are majorly found along the convergent and transform plate boundaries. Earthquakes occurs when the stress and pressure imposed on the rock exceeds its internal strength which cause a sudden release of energy and shaking of land. It is easily triggered along convergent and transform plate boundaries due to plate movements. At convergent plate boundary, two plates collided and subducts and forming compressional force. The subduction of plates puts stress and energy on the rocks and thus breaking the rocks to release pressure and forms earthquake, which submarine earthquake is common mostly along ocean-ocean collision. Similarly, along transform plate boundaries, like the movement of Pacific plate and North American plate, two plates slide past each other and forms tensional force that causes friction and stress on the rock, thus resulting in earthquakes. Submarine earthquakes causes a ^vertical displacement of the sea floor and so forming a bulge of water. The bulge of water will gradually collapses ^(due to gravity) form large succession of waves washing in different directions and thus tsunamis are formed when reaching the land. Examples brought by submarine earthquakes included ^of tsunamis ^the tsunami the Tohoku Earthquake in Japan in 2011 and ^the tsunami the Chile brought by [unclear: Chile Earthquake] caused by the collision of South American plate and Nazca plate. Moving on, tsunamis are also brought by submarine volcanic eruptions along divergent plate boundaries and convergent plate boundaries. At divergence plate boundaries, two plates move apart, forming tensional forces. Fissure is created and caused a release of pressure of the asthenosphere. It will then lower its melting point and so produce magma, and eventually rises through the fissure and erupts at the ocean surface as lava under ocean-ocean divergence. Submarine volcanoes are thereby formed like those at the Mid-Atlantic zone. Similarly, along convergent plate boundaries, submarine volcanoes will also be formed. Two plates collides and the denser plate will subduct to form compressional force. Cracks are created on the crust and the subducted plate releases water to the asthenosphere to lower its melting point to form magma. It then rises through the cracks and erupts on the surface as lava, forming submarine volcanoes, typically under ocean-ocean collision like that of the collision of Indo-Australian plate and the Eurasian plate. When submarine volcanoes empts, it will emit volcanic materials like volcanic ashes, gases, lava, rock fragments, etc, which will collapse on the ocean floor and again forming large succession of waves, thus resulting in the occurence of tsunamis. Violent volcanic eruptions under convergent plate boundaries to trigger tsunamis is more common as vent eruption is frequently found at convergent plate boundaries with acid lava zones, thus tsunamis are more oftenly found along the Pacific Ring of Fire with most covered by compressional forces. Examples of tsunamis caused by volcanic eruptions included that in Tonga (2022) ^submarine and Indonesia caused by the collision of Indo-Australian plate and Eurasian plate. Lastly, tsunamis may be formed by submarine landslides that could occur in any type of plate boundaries. The falling and collapse of landslide materials and rock fragments causes a splash on the ocean floor, forming a bulge that collapses and thus large succession of waves which results in tsunamis. The tsunami in Indonesia in 2014 is a typical example caused by submarine landslides. To add on, it can be shown that tsunamis are mostly found on convergent plate boundaries due to a more violent volcanic eruptions and commonly found ^submarine submarine earthquakes when plates collide, thus showing the major distribution of tsunamis along the Circum-Pacific Belt which accounts for 90% of tsunamis on earth. Consequently, various plate movements along different plate boundaries leads to the occurance of tsunamis with the triggering of submarine earthquakes, submarine volcanic erupt[?]ns and submarine landslides.

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逐個評分點

tsunamis are formed by the uplifting and displacement of seafloor or sea bed, which is formed ^with a large succession of waves washing towards the shore. It is mostly formed by submarine earthquakes, submarine landslides and submarine volcanic eruptions. S1

正確指出形成海嘯波的主要觸發因素及海底物理位移機制。

At convergent plate boundary, two plates collided and subducts and forming compressional force... Submarine earthquakes causes a ^vertical displacement of the sea floor and so forming a bulge of water. The bulge of water will gradually collapses ^(due to gravity) form large succession of waves washing in different directions and thus tsunamis are formed when reaching the land. Examples brought by S2

完整闡述結合匯聚板塊邊界的板塊俯衝、海底地震、垂直海床位移、水體隆起崩塌及海嘯波形成機聯,並輔以準確例子。

Similarly, along transform plate boundaries, like the movement of Pacific plate and North American plate, two plates slide past each other and forms tensional force that causes friction and stress on the rock, thus resulting in earthquakes. S3

包含事實錯誤,斷言轉換板塊邊界會形成張力,且遺漏解釋轉換滑動如何導致垂直海床位移以產生海嘯的機制。

At divergence plate boundaries, two plates move apart, forming tensional forces. Fissure is created and caused a release of pressure of the asthenosphere. It will then lower its melting point and so produce magma, and eventually rises through the fissure and erupts at the ocean surface as lava under ocean-ocean divergence. Submarine volcanoes are thereby formed like those at the Mid-Atlantic zone. S4

描述發散板塊邊界的海底火山形成,但未能寫出火山活動與海嘯波生成之間的關聯機制。

along convergent plate boundaries, submarine volcanoes will also be formed. Two plates collides and the denser plate will subduct... When submarine volcanoes empts, it will emit volcanic materials like volcanic ashes, gases, lava, rock fragments, etc, which will collapse on the ocean floor and again forming large succession of waves, thus resulting in the occurence of tsunamis... Examples of tsuna S5

解釋俯衝、岩漿噴發及海底火山物質崩塌如何排擠海水形成海嘯波,並以2022年湯加為例作支持。

tsunamis may be formed by submarine landslides that could occur in any type of plate boundaries. The falling and collapse of landslide materials and rock fragments causes a splash on the ocean floor, forming a bulge that collapses and thus large succession of waves which results in tsunamis. S6

解釋海床上的山泥傾瀉物質下墜或崩塌如何排擠海水並製造海嘯波。

tsunamis are mostly found on convergent plate boundaries due to a more violent volcanic eruptions and commonly found ^submarine submarine earthquakes when plates collide, thus showing the major distribution of tsunamis along the Circum-Pacific Belt which accounts for 90% of tsunamis on earth. S7

將匯聚板塊邊界的俯衝帶與環太平洋帶海嘯的空間集結情況聯繫起來。

逐段評語

呢段簡略咁引介板塊邊界同內部力量,帶出下文點樣討論板塊運動引致海嘯。

呢段清晰指出海嘯係由海底地床抬升同位移造成,並列出三大成因:海底地震、海底滑坡同海底火山爆發。

呢段開始解釋海底地震嘅成因,指出岩層承受過度應力、超過強度後釋放能量,並集中喺隱沒帶同轉形邊界。

呢段詳細描述收斂同轉形邊界嘅地震機制,並列舉 Tohoku 2011 同 Chile 地震作例子。

呢段嘗試解釋張裂邊界點樣形成海底火山,並以 Mid-Atlantic Ridge 做例子。

呢段延續上文,解釋收斂邊界點樣透過隱沒同熔點降低來形成海底火山。

呢段補充火山爆發點樣透過塌陷海床物質引發海嘯,並以 Tonga (2022) 為例。

呢段引進最後一個成因:任何板塊邊界都可能發生嘅海底滑坡。

呢段描述海底滑坡點樣透過砸向海底引起水體波動而形成海嘯。

呢段總結收斂板塊邊界同太平洋環帶係海嘯最集中嘅地區。

呢段重申不同板塊邊界嘅運動點樣透過三大機制引發海嘯。

呢段收結全文,呼應三大觸發海嘯嘅海底災害類型。

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題目Discuss the effectiveness of early warning systems in reducing the casualties of tsunami-prone areas. (12 marks)
學生原答
Moving on to the next point, tsunamis may bring huge casualties and economic losses to the affected areas and thus should have measures to prevent. Early warning systems are a kind of precautionary measures yet not too effective in reducing casualties. Starting with, early warning systems are majorly used to inform the occurence of hazards before its approach to provide sufficient evacuation time for residents to escape to prevent loss of lives. For instance, tsunami guages are used to predict the occurence of tsunamis and tsunami warning system, like that of the Indian Ocean warning centres and Pacific tsunami warning systems were made to provide adequate information and time for evacuation to reduce casualties. When early warnings are established, people may flee from dangerous areas like going up on highlands to save their lives. Nevertheless, it is mostly ineffective in reducing casualties in the areas. First, the effectiveness of warning systems depends on the accuracy of its prediction. Without accurate prediction, the time for people to escape will be insufficient and thus failing to reduce casualties. Tsunamis are oftenly hard to predict due to its sudden large sussection of waves, and also its immensely fast speed of over 10?km/h [unclear: 100km/h], hence failing to accurately predict its occurence to issue early warning systems will limit its effectiveness. Moreover, the effectiveness of warning systems depends on the economic level and technological development in regions. Setting up monitoring centres and ocean bottom tsunami buoys to monitor the ocean activity requires higher level of technology and also large amount of capital investment. Less developed countries like India, Chile, Phillipines are also prone to tsunamis yet with insufficient capital and technology input to invest in the warning systems, hence limiting the effectiveness of the early warning systems in reducing casualties. Additionally, the level of awareness of hazards and education also causes constraints that make the warning systems ineffective. For example, less developed countries like Indonesia and Tonga are also prone to tsunamis yet is less developed with low education level and awareness of preparation and evacuation during hazards. Even if early warning systems were posed, citizens don't know how to prepare or evacuate to protect themselves hence making the warning systems very ineffective in reducing losses of life due to a low awareness. Besides, tsunamis have a very short onset time that hinders the effectiveness of early warning systems. For example, the Tohoku earthquake 2011 with magnitude of 9.1 has triggered a large tsunami within just two hours. Such short onset time makes it hard to predict and for citizens to evacuate even with a warning system posed, thereby limiting the effectiveness of tsunami warning systems to reduce casualties. Lastly, secondary hazards may be resulted after tsunamis which warning systems could not prevent its loss of life. For example, tsunamis caused a contamination of water that poses health diseases and death, while also breaking roads and infrastructures that hinder rescuing, that will lead to more casualties, hence limiting the effectiveness of preventing casualties in the areas. Other measures could therefore be adopted together with warning systems to reduce casualties, like frequent tsunami evacuation drills. This could increase the awareness of people during or before hazards and so raising the effectiveness of the warning systems. Moreover, land use zoning shall be implementated together with warning system to reduce casualties and losses. For example, buffer zones with mangroves shall be grown to reduce energy and slow down its onset, while housing should no longer be developed in coastal low-lying areas and also establishing partial evacuation route to raise the effectiveness of warning systems. Consequently, with early warning systems on its own, it is mostly ineffective in reducing casualties in hazard prone areas.

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early warning systems are majorly used to inform the occurence of hazards before its approach to provide sufficient evacuation time for residents to escape to prevent loss of lives. For instance, tsunami guages are used to predict the occurence of tsunamis and tsunami warning system, like that of the Indian Ocean warning centres and Pacific tsunami warning systems were made to provide adequate inf S1

正確描述預警系統及監測的機制與功能,為疏散到高地爭取預警時間以減少傷亡。

effectiveness of warning systems depends on the accuracy of its prediction. Without accurate prediction, the time for people to escape will be insufficient and thus failing to reduce casualties. Tsunamis are oftenly hard to predict due to its sudden large sussection of waves, and also its immensely fast speed of over 10?km/h, hence failing to accurately predict its occurence to issue early warning S2

解釋波浪傳播速度與預測難度如何限制預警時間,並制約減少傷亡的成效。

effectiveness of warning systems depends on the economic level and technological development in regions. Setting up monitoring centres and ocean bottom tsunami buoys to monitor the ocean activity requires higher level of technology and also large amount of capital investment. Less developed countries like India, Chile, Phillipines are also prone to tsunamis yet with insufficient capital and techno S3

指出海底浮標及監測中心對資金和技術的高要求,將欠發達國家的資金限制與系統成效較低聯繫起來。

level of awareness of hazards and education also causes constraints that make the warning systems ineffective. For example, less developed countries like Indonesia and Tonga are also prone to tsunamis yet is less developed with low education level and awareness of preparation and evacuation during hazards. Even if early warning systems were posed, citizens don't know how to prepare or evacuate to S4

解釋低公眾意識及缺乏災害教育如何阻礙有效的疏散應對,即使發出警報亦然。

tsunamis have a very short onset time that hinders the effectiveness of early warning systems. For example, the Tohoku earthquake 2011 with magnitude of 9.1 has triggered a large tsunami within just two hours. Such short onset time makes it hard to predict and for citizens to evacuate even with a warning system posed, thereby limiting the effectiveness of tsunami warning systems to reduce casualti S5

將近岸地震後的短髮作時間聯繫到不足的疏散時間,無論有否發出警報。

secondary hazards may be resulted after tsunamis which warning systems could not prevent its loss of life. For example, tsunamis caused a contamination of water that poses health diseases and death, while also breaking roads and infrastructures that hinder rescuing, that will lead to more casualties, hence limiting the effectiveness of preventing casualties in the areas. S6

解釋預警系統無法防範事後次生災害,例如水質污染及受損的救援基建。

Other measures could therefore be adopted together with warning systems to reduce casualties, like frequent tsunami evacuation drills. This could increase the awareness of people during or before hazards and so raising the effectiveness of the warning systems. S7

將疏散演習聯繫為一項互補措施,能提升公眾意識及預警系統的應變能力。

land use zoning shall be implementated together with warning system to reduce casualties and losses. For example, buffer zones with mangroves shall be grown to reduce energy and slow down its onset, while housing should no longer be developed in coastal low-lying areas and also establishing partial evacuation route to raise the effectiveness of warning systems. S8

詳細闡述互補措施(土地利用分區、紅樹林海岸緩衝帶、限制低窪地區建屋、疏散路線)以配合預警系統來減少暴露度及波浪能量。

Consequently, with early warning systems on its own, it is mostly ineffective in reducing casualties in hazard prone areas. S9

表明清晰的整體評估立場,總結指若沒有互補措施,單靠預警系統大多成效不彰。

逐段評語

帶出文章主題,指出海嘯會帶來嚴重傷亡及經濟損失,需要採取防範措施。

提出初步立場,認為早期預警系統喺減少傷亡方面並唔係太有效。

呢段解釋咗 early warning systems 嘅運作機制,並舉出 Indian Ocean warning centres 同 Pacific tsunami warning systems 做例子。

簡述收到預警後居民可以撤離至高地保命。

重申預警系統單獨運作時喺減少傷亡方面效果有限。

指出預警系統嘅有效性取決於預測準確度,而海嘯速度極快令準確預測變得困難。

呢段討論咗經濟水平同技術發展點樣限制預警系統嘅設置同成效。

以印度、智利同菲律賓為例,說明發展中國家因資金同技術不足而限制預警系統成效。

以印尼同湯加為例,指出公眾防災意識同教育水平低會令預警系統形同虛設。

指出海嘯極短嘅發生時間會妨礙預警系統嘅效用。

以 2011 Tohoku earthquake 為例,說明海嘯極短嘅 onset time 令人難以疏散。

指出預警係數無法阻止水質汙染同基建損毀等次生災害帶黎嘅傷亡。

提出需要配合疏散演習等其他措施嚟提高預警係數嘅有效性。

說明頻繁嘅疏散演習可以提升公眾意識,從而增強預警系統嘅成效。

呢段建議用土地利用規劃同海岸緩衝帶作為相輔相成嘅措施嚟提高成效。

總結認為單靠早期預警係數,喺災害多發地區減少傷亡嘅效果係有限嘅。

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